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Volume 2, Issue 9 September 2006
in this issue
  • August Cool Contest Challenge Winner - Lowell Thomas
  • Putting The Critics In Their Place by Sophronia Scott
  • Email Grammar Quiz by Kelly Watkins
  • Cool Announcements

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    Dear Writer,

    I hope you enjoyed your summer. It went way too fast for me!

    My daughter is entering her first year of high school, and my son is a senior. It's an exciting time for them, but a bit sad for me. I think it's part of my denial that I will be 40 this month...LOL

    Our September interview is with Lang Buchanan, authors of Micah’s Child. To read about this wonderful, talented writing team, please click here: Lang Buchanan Interview

    The September Cool Contest Challenge has a visual. My son took a picture of the sun through his rearview mirror. Okay, so I feel faint when I think of him driving and taking pictures while cruising down the highway, but it is a cool shot. For details, click here: September Contest

    Congratulations to our August Cool Contest Challenge Winner, Lowell Thomas! The challenge was to send us your back cover blurb. Lowell's winning entry appears in this newsletter.

    Thank you to all who entered!

    For fun - if you can guess my birthday, I'll send you a prize! Hint: It falls somewhere between September 9th and the 30th...LOL Send it to sandy@coolstuff4writers.com with Sandy's B-Day in the subject line.

    This month's articles are:

    Putting The Critics In Their Place by Sophronia Scott

    Email Grammar Quiz by Kelly Watkins

    Don't forget to check out the Cool Announcements!

    It's that time again! Please show your support by nominating CoolStuff4Writers for the 2007 Writer's Digest's Top 101 Websites for Writers. To nominate us, e-mail writersdig@fwpubs.com with "101 Sites" as the subject line.

    We truly appreciate your support and hope you'll take a minute to vote for us. Thank you all so much!

    If we make the list for 2007, I'll hold another raffle for a one year subscription to Writer's Digest Magazine.

    Until next time...stay well...stay cool...stay in your write mind!

    Best writing wishes,

    Sandy & Sean

    Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia - E.L. Doctorow


    August Cool Contest Challenge Winner - Lowell Thomas

    Lowell Thomas has not forgotten the people among us who sacrificed so much and witnessed things most of us will never see. He has broken the silence of those heroes and in so doing has preserved a piece of history that is a worthwhile read for people of all ages. With their silence broken, Thomas’s heroes tell their grim stories. This is war like it is. >p> The experiences of the combat veterans in this book are a vital part of the history of Midland County . . . they are real, gripping and sometimes unpleasant.

    Silent Heroes is about survivors. These Midland County veterans relate their real battle experiences during wartime. You soon realize “war is hell” and not as glorified as Hollywood filmmakers often depict. Combat veterans are now telling of the ravages of war and giving us history lessons not found in textbooks.

    Thomas, a Midland, Michigan native, is a veteran, freelance writer, and lifelong educator. His works include The Tree Still Grows in Midland, Grandpa’s Stories, and So Far . . . So Good: The Other Lowell Thomas Story.

    Putting The Critics In Their Place by Sophronia Scott

    I once read that if you were a writer, it wasn't enough to just write. "You must publish what you write" was the given advice. I believe that's true and it's great advice. But when you do that, you have to know at least three things are going to happen: 1.) Someone will like your writing. 2.) Someone will dislike your writing. 3.) Someone won't care! If you allow all these reactions to make or break you, you'll be on an endless emotional roller coaster ride. You can smooth out the peaks and valleys, though, if you ask yourself a few questions.

    Who is Saying it?

    You may have heard the saying "consider the source". That's important when you're weighing any commentary on your work. In the case of teachers, editors or book reviewers, you want to be confident that the person is truly objective and knows what they're doing. If you're sure of them, you can take what they say, good and bad, and learn from them. These aren't people out to destroy you (usually!), so don't shoot the messenger.

    Once people in the real world start buying and reading your work, you'll definitely hear about who loved it and who hated it. But pay close attention because there's more to it than a love-hate relationship. My first novel was packaged in such a way that it looked like an urban romance when in fact it is a complex family drama. I knew people who picked up the book expecting a light romance would be sorely disappointed--and that's exactly what happened when my novel was featured in a book-of-the-month club that specialized in selling urban romance. Many of their customers who bought my book hated it!

    What Are They Saying?

    If I had taken their criticism at face value, I would have felt like a failure. But all of the reader comments I saw on the club's website: "Too slow, boring, not enough se*x" told me they were expecting a different kind of book--and I didn't blame them! I would have been miffed too if I had expected "Valley of the Dolls" and ended up reading "War and Peace"! These readers were not in my target market, so the comments didn't upset me.

    Readers in my target market gave different feedback. Yes, they liked the book, but that wasn't all: I could tell they had engaged with the book and had invested in the characters. Even comments about how frustrated they got with the main character were good because it meant they cared enough to be frustrated. If these readers had found the book slow and boring, I would have known for certain I had a problem.

    Is it Consistent with What You Know of Your Work?

    As a writer, you must know your own work well enough to help you decide what criticism makes sense and what doesn't. I've said before that I believe most writers know in their heart when something is wrong or if they're having problems with their material. If you know writing dialogue is difficult for you, there's no reason to be hurt or surprised when someone says your dialogue is weak or unbelieveable. So do an open and honest evaluation of what the reader and/or critic is saying. Then you can...

    Make a Decision: What Will You Do?

    No matter where your feedback is coming from, it will always be your decision whether or not you do anything with it. Sometimes feedback will open up new ideas and you're happy to rewrite based on those comments because you know the work will be better. Sometimes the book is already out there, and the feedback can only make you think about what you'll do differently next time. Or maybe you won't make a change at all. There's a particular scene in my novel that's so soap opera-ish it's almost ridiculous. But I knew that when I wrote it and I wanted it to be that way because I wanted to show how love can make people do crazy things. I wasn't going to change it.

    But if I hadn't been clear on my intentions for the scene, I would have felt horrible everytime it was brought up in a book group's discussion. It was easier for me to stand up for my writing because I had been clear about what I was doing. So, for the sake of your writer's heart, be clear--all the better to see your way through to a better book.

    © 2006 Sophfronia Scott

    About the Author:

    WOULD YOU LIKE TO SEE MORE ARTICLES LIKE THIS ONE? See Sophfronia's The Book Sistah Blog, category "Articles". Author and Writing Coach Sophfronia Scott is "The Book Sistah" TM. Get her FREE REPORT, "The 5 Big Mistakes Most Writers Make When Trying to Get Published" and her FREE online writing and publishing tips at www.ThebookSistah.com

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    Email Grammar Quiz by Kelly Watkins

    How good is your grammar? When writing email messages, proper grammar is important. By being aware of common mistakes, you can avoid them.

    In other words, you don’t need to know all the rules. (What a relief!) But, . . . (You knew that was coming, didn’t you?) you need to know what you don’t know. If you are unsure if something is correct, look it up. Or, ask someone knowledgeable for assistance.

    If you don’t have the time to seek help, here’s a quick tip. Use different wording. To put it another way:

    If you can’t determine how to make the sentence correct, re-word the sentence so it doesn’t contain the item you’re having trouble with. Please don’t tell your high school English teacher that I made this suggestion!

    Yes, it would be great if the entire country knew proper English. However, the reality is many people don’t. The goal of this article is to convince you to select the grammar that you know is correct.

    Quiz Are your grammar skills good enough? Find out by taking the following quiz.

    Directions: Indicate whether the specified phrase is Correct (C) or Incorrect (I).

    CI1.John is (laying) on the couch in the office.

    CI2.Peter (laid) the file on the desk.

    CI3.He (sat) in front of the computer.

    CI4.(Set) the files on my desk when you are done.

    CI5.The customers want (their) price quote now.

    CI6.The customer wants (their) phone call returned.

    CI7.Wilma had (less) callers on her line.

    CI8.Fred has (fewer) employees.

    Solutions

    1.Incorrect. The correct answer is lying. To lie means to recline. The verb is intransitive; it does not require an object. The past tense is “lay.”

    2.Correct. To lay means to put or place. The verb is transitive; it requires an object. The past tense is “laid.”

    3.Correct. To sit means to be seated. The verb is intransitive. The past tense is “sat.”

    4.Correct. To set means to put or place. The verb is transitive. The past tense is “set.” (Yes, it is the same as the present tense. This is, after all, English grammar. It is not supposed to make sense.)

    5.Correct. The antecedent is plural which requires a plural pronoun. In other words, the plural form of “customers” requires using a plural pronoun “their.”

    6.Incorrect. The antecedent is singular which requires a singular pronoun. In other words, the singular form of “customer” requires using a singular pronoun “his or her.” This can also be written “his/her.”

    7.Incorrect. The correct word is “fewer.” Fewer is used when you can count the quantity (e.g., “fewer students,” or “fewer hours in the workday,” or “fewer corn kernels”). Less is used with an indeterminate quantity (e.g., “less interest,” or “less time,” or “less corn”).

    8.Correct. Fred can count the number of his employees, so “fewer” is correct.

    Score:

    8 = You’re perfect. (But, you knew that already.) Keep emailing!

    6 - 7 = You’re okay. You could learn a few tips from my book, Email Etiquette Made Easy (see link in resource box).

    3 - 5 = You could use some help. Try my book, Email Etiquette Made Easy (see link in resource box).

    Less than 3 = Ugh! Call me now! We’ll schedule your intense therapy immediately.

    About the Author:

    Kelly J. Watkins, MBA, Louisville, KY. Visit: www.KeepCustomers.com to order, Email Etiquette Made Easy (a comprehensive guide filled with exercises & examples) or for tips on communication & customer service! (812) 246-2424 or kelly@keepcustomers.com

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    Cool Announcements

    If you haven't checked out Wow! Women on Writing yet, do it now! This site is awesome. It has articles, market listings, a contest and great writing columns that include: 20 Questions, Inspiration, How To, Must Haves, and a classified section. Wow! Women on Writing

    I want to take this opportunity to congratulate Beryl Hall Bray on this new endeavor. I wish you much success with Wow! Women on Writing. It Rocks!

    If you write screenplays, you may be interested in the Vail Film Festival Screenplay Competition. For details: Vail Film Festival Screenplay Competition

    Thoughts and Ramblings is accepting submissions for a January 2007 Anthology. I found this on Craigslist and thought it was quite humorous and interesting. For details: thoughtsandramblings

    National Novel Writing Month is in November. This is a pretty cool challenge. I know people who've participated in this and they had a blast. For details: nanowrimo

    Be sure to check out Nicole Allard's Writers Success. This site has articles, writing classes, contests, product reviews and more! Writers Success

    Thinks.com has a section called "Words and Wordplay" that is a lot of fun. Some of the categories are: Awful Authors, Oxymorons and The Devil's Dictionary. This stuff cracked me up. I hope you'll find it just as funny. Check it out: Words and Wordplays

    Bobbie Christmas is the "Book Doctor" and Author of Write In Style, a triple-award-winning textbook for writers of fiction and nonfiction, available wherever books are sold.

    Bobbie loves to receive questions from writers and offer her expert advice. If you have any questions you need answered, please e-mail her at: Bobbie@zebraeditor.com You can also sign up for her Free newsletter for writers to get tips, answers, marketing information and news of interest to writers. Go to www.zebraeditor.com and click on "Free Newsletter" For the latest Q&A with Bobbie, go to AskTheBookDoctor on the CS4W site.

    If you have an announcement you would like to share, please send it to: sandy@coolstuff4writers.com

    Thank you all very much! Please feel free to write with anything that's on your mind! I always love to hear from you!

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