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Vol. 4, Issue 8 August 2008
in this issue
  • July Cool Contest Challenge Winner - Iseult Murphy
  • When Smart Authors Get Taken - by Catherine Johnson
  • Cool Announcements

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    Dear Writer,

    I hope this newsletter finds you well and writing!

    I've received a couple of e-mails about the newsletter format. A couple of people are receiving it with no spaces between the paragraphs. I send myself a test version (in both html and text) before I mail it out to check the format and to make sure the links work. My test version always looks fine. I'm not sure why this is happening and want to apologize if yours isn't showing up correctly. I use Constant Contact to send the newsletter out, but if you're having issues, I'll be happy to send you a copy manually via my e-mail address.

    We're excited to announce that Cool Stuff 4 Writers is participating in the "50 Days 50 Books Giveaway" for Joy Nash's Imortals: The Crossing.

    Joy Nash's Immortals: The Crossing--sixth book in Dorchester's USA Today Bestselling series Immortals--hits the bookshelves on September 30. But 50 lucky readers will win autographed copies on or before that date!

    Yes, that's right - 50 copies of The Crossing will be given away on 50 participating websites and blogs, which means readers have 50 online chances to win this hot new paranormal romance during the 50 days between August 12 and September 30.

    Cool Stuff 4 Writers will choose a winner on September 16th. We'll be accepting entries from August 15th thru September 15th. Please send your name to sandy@coolstuff4writers.com with "Joy Nash Giveaway" in the subject line. The winner will be notified on September 16th.

    Please visit the CS4W home page for more information about the book, to read an excerpt and for a complete listing of participating web sites.

    We want to thank Joy for this opportunity and wish her much success!

    I'm hoping to post our interview with Stephany Evans this coming week. I'm sorry for the delay, but Stephany has been very busy.

    I am in the process of working on other interviews and will keep you updated.

    Congratulations to our July Cool Contest Challenge Winner - Iseult Murphy! You can read Iseult's winning entry in this newsletter and on the site.

    Thank you to all who entered! I received so many great entries!

    Details for the August Cool Contest Challenge are posted on the home page.

    For those of you who have just signed up for the newsletter, details for our Cool Contest Challenges can be found on the web site on the first of every month. We appreciate your support and welcome you to the CoolNewsletter4Writers!

    Congratulations to our Micah's Child Raffle Winner - Pat Kennelly!

    Lang Buchanan wishes to congratulate Pat and to thank everyone who entered!

    I'd like to share an idea with you - I was thinking we could have a "Cool Writing Tips" section in the newsletter. Readers of the newsletter could submit writing tips and I will publish them every month. I can't offer payment at this time, but thought it would be fun. I would of course include your name and a link back to your web site. If you're interested, please email sandy@coolstuff4writers.com with "Cool Writing Tips" in the subject line.

    I appreciate your feedback and do enjoy hearing from you. The e-mails I receive always brighten my day!

    Be sure to check out Catherine Johnson's article When Smart Authors Get Taken. Catherine discusses literary agent scams.

    Be sure to check out the Cool Announcements too!

    Until next time...stay well...stay cool...stay in your write mind!

    Sandy & Sean

    I get up in the morning, torture a typewriter until it screams, then stop. - Clarence Budington Kelland


    July Cool Contest Challenge Winner - Iseult Murphy

    "Life's A Beach"

    In July, we asked you to write a beach scene using purple prose. Iseult Murphy sent this winning entry:

    First Swim - By Iseult Murphy

    The waves crashed in increasing crescendo against the golden silken smooth beach. The sand was as velvety as the chocolate thighs of the vestal virgins that rolled the most expensive Cuban cigars. The green blue aquamarine water scintillated in a coruscation of light due to the mixture of currents and phytoplankton that mingled in the saline H2O.

    Terry pushed aside the glittering grains of silica and gazed longingly down the damp ocean kissed shore towards the wetness of the water. A long row of crows stood as black sentinels between him and his goal. Their hungry beaks glistened above their funeral plumage. Their round black button eyes twinkled like black pearls spread across the alabaster bosom of a debutante. Even from such a distance, Terry could hear the slap of their barbed tongues salivating within their narrow mouths.

    The warm sand was a mindless womb. It had sheltered Terry, protecting him and cradling him, but now it was time to leave. Beside him his family churned the beach into a cratered pock marked surface reminiscent of a barren lunar valley. Terry struggled to break free of the birth canal he had made and rushed headlong, helter skelter, surrounded by a thong of his squealing free wheeling brothers, sisters, cousins and extended family down towards the welcoming whispering ocean with the line of death bringing, stomach rumbled corvids.

    The birds squawked in delight and beat the hot air with their ragged wings. Feathers flew and beaks snapped like thunder claps left and right. Terry closed his eyes and ran so fast it hurt. Slipping and sliding, his relations on either side preoccupied by the crows, he shot between the scaly legs of one of the birds and with a triumphant splash, surged into the frothy coolness of the waves. He spread his tiny flippers and pushed forth through the water, his first trial as a sea turtle complete.

    Iseult Murphy writes fantasy, horror and science fiction short stories and novels. She lives on the east coast of Ireland with three dogs, two cats and a bogeyman at the top of the stairs. Find out more about her at www.iseultmurphy.com

    When Smart Authors Get Taken - by Catherine Johnson

    When Smart Authors Get Taken

    NOTE: This is the first of two articles chronicling the experience of two authors who unwittingly became victims of literary agent scams.

    One of the first things writers seeking agency representation should learn is that legitimate agents DO NOT charge author fees. These include agents who charge reading fees simply to read your manuscript; evaluation fees to review your manuscript; agents who require writers to pre-purchase books; or pay some of the publication and/or marketing costs.

    There are a host of agent scams preying on authors desperate to see their book in print. One of the absolute best resources on the Internet regarding questionable agent practices can be found on the Science Fiction and Fantasy Writers of America (SFWA) site under the section called "Writer Beware". SFWA is constantly researching and updating the Writer Beware area to help educate authors to avoid the endless writer-related scams.

    However, even writers who do their homework are not immune to unscrupulous agents. These two examples illustrate how even smart authors can get taken.

    In the fall of 2003 I heard from an agency offering representation for my novel. The agent provided specific instructions on how the manuscript should be formatted for the best possible presentation. Before I signed anything, I researched the agency which I had found through a reputable author organization. Clearly, I didn't do enough.

    The agency included the six-month contract in their offer of representation, which I thought was odd. But it would get even worse. As I later learned from another author, legitimate agents don't make representation offers through the mail electronic or otherwise, they call you personally.

    The agency then explained they would need approximately 25 copies of the manuscript to send to publishers. I had two options: (a) I could make copies as the agency needed and pay for postage each time, or (b) pay the agency a flat-fee of $250 and let them make the copies. Knowing I should never have to pay an agent money up-front, my gut-reaction was to pass. However two author friends and several family members reminded me I had just paid $125.00 for three copies of the manuscript. This meant my final tally on 25 copies would be much larger than $250. They convinced me to change my mind and pay the fee.

    Six months later I received a letter from the agency saying they were unable to find representation for my novel. Attached was a crooked, mimeographed list of the 25 publishers they had supposedly sent the manuscript to. When I contacted the organization where I had obtained the agent's name, they asked an important question: Had I gotten copies of the rejection letter from every single publisher the agent had contacted? When I said no, the organization explained that's how legitimate agents work and to ask the agency for those rejection letters. When I did, the agent told me those files had been destroyed at the end of the contract.

    How The Scam Works: Going back to the contract, the agent had already dated the contract for six months which meant I lost several weeks making the requested format changes. My attorney didn't feel that was unusual, but I had reservations. Second, do the math. Two-hundred fifty dollars times a thousand "clients" is a cool $250,000. Most legitimate agents are inundated with thousands of authors seeking representation every year, so an unscrupulous agent can simply sit back and wait for their "clients" to send that $250 believing they have representation with a legitimate agent. I discovered later that the agency was on a list highlighting the 20 worst literary agents.

    The second scam also seemed to start out as legitimate. Carl, a co-worker, announced at a staff meeting he'd obtained agency representation for his novel. When he mentioned the name of the agency, I recognized it as one who had recently rejected me. The agent had offered some suggestions on how to improve the story and mentioned she would be interested in taking another look after I'd made revisions.

    Carl had also been told his manuscript needed work and had been offered suggestions for editing and revisions. But the agent went even further. She told Carl he could do the revisions or an editor she knew could do the polish for $1,500. In either case, she claimed with those tweaks she could "definitely sell this book". Carl declined the editor's services, and for the next several weeks worked on revising his novel during every free moment. When he submitted the completed manuscript, Carl was then told that because book marketing costs are so expensive, he would need to put up $25,000 to get the process started. The agent promised he would get that money back and much more once the book was published.

    How The Scam Works: This agent had multiple scams going. Had Carl agreed to let the agent's "editor" associate polish the manuscript, he would have been out the $1,500. Usually the literary agent and editorial businesses are owned by the same company and make referrals to each other without the author having any idea of their relationship. They're not interested in improving your work, such agents and editors are only concerned with the editorial fees. At this point Carl realized all of his writing and revising had been for naught. As foolish as Carl felt, at least he hadn't parted with $25,000.

    Finding a good agent can be a very tricky business. Even authors who know better aren't immune to making serious mistakes when it comes to the "promise" of seeing your words in print. Along with the list of following tips, remember the old adage: "If it sounds too good to be true, it probably is".

    Tips:

    The agents contained in the Association of Author Representatives (AAR) database must adhere to a Code of Ethics. This is a great starting point for your agent search and some authors contact only agents belonging to the AAR.

    Research every potential agent you're planning to contact. Start with a Google search of the agency and agent. You may have to look at several sites to gather the information you need to make a well-informed decision. Another excellent resource is Agent Query.

    How many books has the agent actually sold to major publishers? What was the date of the last work they sold? I've found more than one agent still accepting submissions who haven't sold a book in years.

    Use sites such as the Writers Beware section on SFWA and Preditors and Editors who track agents who engage in questionable practices.

    In the event that you are the victim of an unscrupulous literary agent, don't keep quiet because you're embarrassed by your mistake. That's exactly what such agents want writers to do. Instead, approach organizations that are on the lookout for agent scams with your story. By coming forward you'll help keep other authors from making the same mistake.

    Catherine Johnson is the author of the novel, Shades of Darkness, Shades of Grace. Visit her web site at www.CatherineJohnsonNovels.com or contact her via e-mail at: catherinejohns58@yahoo.com

    Cool Announcements

    Griffyn Ink is hosting a contest to find the next great Suspense Novel! All sub-genres are welcome. (including thriller,horror, action, adventure, mystery, detective, medical mystery, etc)

    For complete details, please visit Contest

    or go to www.GriffynInk.com


    Jerry Aragon wrote an article I found interesting and quite unfortunate. It's about writers who don't receive the recognition they deserve.

    Jerry is also known as The Humor Doctor and has been in the humor business for over 50 years.

    To read the article, please visit: Writers Often Get The Short End of the Pencil

    To learn more about Jerry, please visit his web site at: TheHumorDoctorMD

    Thanks, Jerry, for sharing this with us!


    The Library Hotel

    If you're ever in NYC and want to stay at a neat hotel, then you should check this out. Since I live fairly close to NYC, I don't stay overnight. However, after reading about The Library Hotel, I want to stay there!

    They have over 6,000 volumes of books throughout the hotel and each room has a theme with a collection of books that fit the specific category.

    To learn more, please visit their web site: The Library Hotel


    Take A Meeting - A Final Draft Event

    Final Draft is having events in Los Angeles from Sept. 5th-7th and in NYC from Nov. 7th-8th.

    This is a great opportunity for those pursuing a career in screenwriting.

    For details, please visit: Final Draft - Take A Meeting


    National Novel Writing Month

    November will be here before we know it. This means it's time for NaNoWriMo.

    I've never participated in this, but do know people who have and they had a blast. It's a fun way to get a first draft done in record time.

    For more information: NaNoWriMo


    9th Annual WD's Short Short Story Competition

    Deadline is December 1, 2008.

    For more information: 9th Annual WD's Short Short Competition


    Guide to Literary Agents Blog

    This blog offers interviews, agency openings and industry news.

    Check it out: GLA


    18th Annual South Carolina Writers Workshop

    October 24-26 at the Hilton Myrtle Beach Resort.

    In addition to keynote speaker: Michael Connelly, this conference has great workshops, agents, editors and something called a Slush Fest. Sounds cool to me!

    For more info: 18th Annual SC Writers Workshop


    Since I really can't afford to go to conferences right now, I've decided to take an online workshop through the Celtic Hearts Romance Writers. This workshop has to do with Goal, Motivation and Conflict. You don't have to be a member and I believe you don't even have to be an RWA member. I can find out or you can contact them directly, but they offer some neat workshops and the cost is about $15.00.

    A good friend of mine takes a lot of online workshops. Although she has nine books published, she says she loves them and often encourages me to take one. I'm going to do some research over the next month and will list some sites that offer them at a reasonable fee. If you know of any you would like to share, please send them to me.


    Bobbie Christmas is the "Book Doctor" and Author of Write In Style, a triple-award-winning textbook for writers of fiction and nonfiction, available wherever books are sold. Bobbie loves to receive questions from writers and offer her expert advice. If you have any questions you need answered, please e-mail her at: Bobbie@zebraeditor.com

    For the latest Q&A with Bobbie, go to AskTheBookDoctor on the CS4W site.


    If you have an announcement you would like to share with us, please send it to: sandy@coolstuff4writers.com with "announcement" in the subject line.

    I love to hear from you!

    Peace,

    Sandy

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